Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Famous people live in the constant glare of fame and media with in both benefits and drawbacks. Even so, in my opinion the famous person will out weigh of many disadvantage.
One of the main problem for being a famous person is that lack of privacy. Today many followers of celebrities are deep into their personal lives and gather all the information about their celebrities. For the instance, the famous actor is attended a marriage function of their close relative, and one of his fans jumped to him to take photos with him. The celebrity is shouted to him in the function and media has done the coverage about the incident. It become news in all the channels and everyone came to conclusion that the celebrity is showed him a bad person and everyone having debate about this matter. Since, tarnish the image of celebrity because of this incident.
On the flip side, the being of famous person is open gate to the wealth. Many of the celebrity they are enaging with the adverstiments of domestic and international products which gets paid very well for famous people. More and more funds to endorse their products in a short time to the society. The consumers and fans of the celebrity will buy that products without having any second thoughts about the items. The fans will follow the celebrity words and imitate like him. Also, the celebrity has well reputation and good will in the society. He will encourages his fans to do the good things to the society by helping under privileage people interms of education, marriage and creating job opportunities for them. However, will get good name in the society and also celebrity will get more change in the politics career without any advertisement be able to contest for election.
In conclusion, one of the main disadvantages of famous celebrity is that secracy of privacy. However, it pales in comparison of many advantages that will brings fame.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
...ion the famous person will out weigh of many disadvantage. One of the main problem for being a...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...one the coverage about the incident. It become news in all the channels and everyone c...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'encourage'
Suggestion: encourage
...n and good will in the society. He will encourages his fans to do the good things to the s...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...usion, one of the main disadvantages of famous celebrity is that secracy of privacy. However, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, second, so, well, even so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84403669725 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5990249791 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489296636086 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0018768293 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266280526546 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842569674765 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445433962632 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140672660161 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340792303596 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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