being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings
problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Despite the advantages of being a celebrity, there are some problems which they might have in their lives. Although ordinary people know about these problems, they would never feel them in their own lives.
In general, celebrities have happier life rather than normal people. The money and possession that make them even richer can buy them comfort and happiness. If they want to travel, they will book the best luxurious hotel and rent fabulous cars. In fact, they are always being prioritized and appreciated because of their wealth. In addition, celebrities earn a huge amount of money by advertising. As they are so famous and have a good reputation among people, they have a great influential impact on people's minds. Eventually, their fans follow their footsteps in many aspects of their life, such as clothing or makeup; therefore, they sign a thousands-dollar contract with companies and clothing industries to publicize for them.
On the other hand, almost every famous man does not feel peace of mind in his life. They are always being watched and tracked by Pupperazi and their fans; they have no clear boundary between personal life and their profession. For example, some news about their relationships is unvailed by the media without their permission; inevitably, they have to hide from cameras to maintain their privacy. Moving to the second point, they have to spend a lot of time and energy to convince their fans. Making everyone satisfied is impossible. To be the best example of a person who has millions of fans. But celebrities have to follow some movements and styles to remain up-to-date so their fans would feel assured of them. Having forced them to do some deeds, they have to ignore their beliefs and thoughts, leading confusion and self-deprecation.
In my view, being a celebrity is difficult. And it needs a strong personality to control every aspect of their life, besides their profession. And celebrities are definitely deserve to experience a better life than others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deserved'.
Suggestion: deserved
...fession. And celebrities are definitely deserve to experience a better life than others...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73344251613 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5468556117 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.15 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975721043781 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437728911363 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473580727643 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786817332136 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269843548129 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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