The best way to reduce traffic congestion in cities is to provide a free public transport service. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience. (India – Academic – March 2018)
Global warming is a prevalent issue and has detrimental effects on the natural environment. Many have the opinion that the restriction of the use of personal vehicles will aid in controlling the air pollution. However, I partially agree with this claim and believe that self owned transport is a necessity for the smooth survival of people and to prevent the strain on transport sector.
Proponents of the ban on private cars or bikes have several reasons for their position. One major reason is that the limited or no use of private automobiles will reduce the proportion of Carbon dioxide that is emitted to the natural surroundings. Thus, people will face less breathing difficulties caused due to polluted air and health of the public will be greatly improved. Nevertheless if people are urged to buy electric cars then the amount of poisonous gases will be minimized. Another significant reason is that the congestion problems during peak hours will be remarkably reduced. To exemplify, a large population have their own two wheeler and four wheeler to commute to office which in turn is the major cause for traffic jams at most routes and a reduction of these vehicles will deter the traffic jam on these roads.
Despite of these superficial benefits, there are certain problems associated with disallowing personally acquired means of travel. One major dilemma is the compromise of the comfort and flexibility of the commuters. To illustrate, people who are accustomed to the luxury of air conditioned four wheeler will have to face the discomfort and suffocation in government provided travelling options like buses and local trains. Another critical problem is the strain on the financial budget that is allocated for the public transport. For instance, in over populated cities like Mumbai, the common travel facilities are already crowded during peak hours and if the city bus service is free of charge then to support the increase in the number of travelers more amount of money will be needed to setup the transport infrastructure.
To conclude, although there are certain environmental and public benefits if personal transport is banned, I somewhat disagree that it should be completely restricted and believe that it is essential for the comfortable travel of the people provided that they use travel alternatives that do not pose a threat to the natural ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Suggestion: wheelers
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Suggestion: wheelers
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Suggestion: wheelers
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Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85416629657 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8214276368 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.6 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100335180416 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308202262109 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300147478589 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679975870309 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153689225192 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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