In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes, the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Old age homes or care centers are a 20th century product and is the result of popularization and preference of nuclear families over joint families. This is a growing phenomenon and a matter of concern not only in Britain, but globally.
Coming to the point of discussion, as to whether it is the responsibility of the government or the family to foot the old age home bill, I would vehemently say that, it is the responsibility of the family to bear the expense, rather than the government. However, there can be exceptions, where, the government can take a situational call on a case to case basis, depending on the nature of the claim. For example, in the case of old people, who have served for their country in the armed forces or who are from an economically strained background, or in the case, wherein, they are not being survived by any children, the government, can analyze and take a situational call and provide support on a pro-rata basis.
This in turn, will initially force feed a sense of responsibility to the younger generation, to take care of the elderly, which, over a gradual passage of time, will lead to the blossom and flourishing of family bonding, nurture good values and family customs, thereby leading to a well rounded contented family. The British parliamentarians, should take it upon themselves, to lead by example and start living a life with the elderly at home. This sets as an example to many and also the government, should organize campaigns and try to incentivize the concept of caring for the elderly at home, in some form ( other than monetary form), which will lead to more of a family bonding and a very firm society, imbibed in culture, friendship and love.
After all, even the families should realize that, they have become what they are today, only because of the love, that their parents had shown them, only because of the time that, they had invested on them, only because, they cared for them. They should realize that, they have eaten up the years of their parents and have become what they are and they are setting an example for their sons and daughters to follow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
.... Coming to the point of discussion, as to whether it is the responsibility of the governm...
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Line 5, column 610, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for the elderly at home, in some form other than monetary form, which will lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, after all, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7358490566 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69880111111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517520215633 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4496696028 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.7 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281110688428 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102528220559 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291866438846 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151147110489 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00292948335045 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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