Older generation, these days, do not like to be a burden on their families, hence, they opt to go to old age homes, when they are no longer able to take care of themselves; Occasionally the government pays for such care. It has been debated as to who is liable to pay for this old age care. While some consider this as the responsibility of family members, others opine that the burden should be taken over by the government. In my opinion however, I believe that this care should be paid by family depending on the financial conditions and the balance should be covered by the government.
Our parents and grandparents work hard most of their lives, without availing luxuries, in order to provide daily requirements for their families. This may lead to consumption of all their savings for the welfare and happiness of their children and family members. As such it is the responsibility of children and close family members to take care of the elderly in times of their needs. For instance, my great grandmother spent all her savings to get her four daughters married. Now, all her daughters contribute equally to take care of their mother and pay for special care.
On the other hand, keeping into mind the taxes paid by the elderly people, when they worked and were healthy, the government has the obligation to pay back to them in times of their needs. If the children or family is struggling to make ends meet, or the expenses of special care cannot be paid by them completely, the government should step forward to pay the deficit and ensure that there is no compromise done in looking after the elderly. For example, individuals pay a part of their income as tax to the government while working. A part of this tax should be kept for old age health care facilities to ensure that no burden is put on the elderly citizens.
In conclusion, the elders of the country are the responsibility of both the family and the government. Hence, based on the financial stability of the family members and the savings of the elderly, government should be able to provide part or full payment for old age home care to the citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: great-grandmother
... times of their needs. For instance, my great grandmother spent all her savings to get her four d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67819148936 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65404611592 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452127659574 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8996398154 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388846187318 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143444235899 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830451906117 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249840816935 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840993716866 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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