Car-ownership has increased enormously. Is this good for traffic jam. What are the measures to be taken by government.
In today's world we all experience more traffic jams than what was seen some 15 years back. Many people believe that it is due to rapidly increasing number of people who own cars. On the contrary, we also have giant car selling companies such as Maruthi and Honda, which reported loss and decrease in Car sales.
If you ask any youngster on his plan, you will hear them saying they want to get job, then buy a care and then a flat and then get married. This clearly indicates that car ownership is considered as a dream which is not very far from achieving. People also developed new hobbies to go for long drives, travel to far of places by own cars. All such hobbies did not exist 30 years back. So, once upon a time having a car was a status symbol. But now it is a mandate. Government should restrict car sales by increasing their prices and motivate people to use public transport. This method is followed in Singapore. This can cut down traffic jam enormously leading to less environmental pollution.
We also having some sets of people who do not want to own a car, as they want to rely on alternative modes of transportation such as Trains, buses, Autos. Some people also are comfortable to use shared rental cars from mobile using Ola or Uber. Using these mobile App is having many benefits such as, they are economical, we no longer have to worry about car maintenance, they also have features such as SOS, which makes women feel more secured.
Considering all above aspects, I do not see any need to own a car. I am more in favor of using public transport, which is good for my pocket and good for environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ch hobbies did not exist 30 years back. So, once upon a time having a car was a status s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51851851852 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46418184798 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2125190114 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182868368174 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05943507046 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473630448517 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119937647903 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479281674797 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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