Caring for children is very important for society, so all mothers and fathers should take children training courses what is your opinion. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it has become a trend to take training in childhood care by many parents. Some people say that it is not required while others argue by saying that it will have tremendous benefits for parents and their younger ones. As per my perspective, I believe that parents should take parent's training classes. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate my point of view.
To embark with, there are manifold reasons to corroborate my notion. First and foremost, these type of training will guide parents about parenthood. The concept of nuclear families is becoming common these days and due to that, there is no elder person is present in the family to give advice to mother and father. Secondly, childcare training will help them to understand their kids. As today's generation is far different from the past. They are more curious, brighter and smarter. Sometimes it becomes a herculean task for parents to handle them or understand their behaviour. Additionally, parenting training centers also teach first aid techniques which can be helpful during the time of medical emergencies. What’s more, these classes also give tips about a healthy lifestyle for kids. As mostly they are spending time indoors rather than enjoying flora and fauna.
Paradoxically, other pool of the thought says that parenting skills can be cultivated naturally. No one can teach parents how they can raise their children. Parents have every right to decide what is better for their toddlers. Moreover, the culture and customs of every family are different. Everyone can not afford to attend these types of courses.
To conclude, arguments can keep going back and forth. Kids are innocent and vulnerable, they are the future of our nation. So, it is a duty of the parents to nurture them with proper care and love. I suggest that for the wellbeing of children it is worth taking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill help them to understand their kids. As todays generation is far different from...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06796116505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62230994785 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1948670942 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0869565217 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4347826087 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153900311297 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414580422796 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484330420615 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980347548304 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023223639118 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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