Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
is true that parents need to know about raising their children and some say that parent training is appropriate for raising children.But these courses may only be useful for some. I strongly oppose imposing these courses on families.
As we know, the family is the first community in which children learn the necessary skills, including talking, walking and playing.The first patterns they see are parents. Therefore, parental attributes have the greatest impact on success and failure in children.The changes of our world today and the significant challenges of social space in recent times with the advent of cyberspace and the advancement of technology are desperately in need of awareness in the field of parenting.So we have taken at least two basic steps by acquiring parenting skills and implementing them in our personal lives; we have both improved their health, growth, and efficiency in the future and have prevented many personal and social disorders such as depression, Anxiety, academic failure, addiction, sexual deviance, suicidal tendencies, delinquency, etc. all of which can somehow be rooted in painful childhood experiences and frustrations of critical times.
On the other hand,In my opinion, it is true that these programs provide parents with the necessary education.but making these plans compulsory may impose heavy costs on the government.And it seems better for families with children with special needs, for example, children with brain problems, autism and people with low mobility.And this information may not be suitable for all families. Because every family has certain conditions in life, they may have to work long hours, and it would be better
to follow such training from websites like YouTube or family-run TV channels.
In conclusion,I think although training for parents is very beneficial, the government should allocate heavy funding for these courses.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53242320819 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8720131449 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638225255973 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.603971173 49.4020404114 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.625 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.625 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167499840329 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731466228845 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459304871497 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902539741782 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442877041254 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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