Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in past. This behaviour is now having a nagative impact on society.Discuss.
Undoubtedly, the behavior of children towards their parents has changed as compared to the past. This issue has become a cause of concern not only for the family but also for the society.
Firstly, children are used to learn respect from their elders as they were growing up. In past, the families were joint and also children's get less previlage. But modern era has ended up the traditional norms. Due to extra attention and freedom teenagers are indulging in disrespectful behavior. Like, I Know many teenagers who do not bother while talking to their elders or some of them having lack of social skills. They do not know how to behave in the society.
Moreover, due to the technological change the gaps between parents have arisen to that extend that they have lost the power to think about right and wrong. If the parents try to stop their child for doing any thing. Ultimately, they take their advice as a interference or sometimes take it as restrictions and shows their false behave. The usually shows seniority in every case. To come out from the restricted atmosphere teenagers titlted towrards sillicit crimes as start taking drugs or might started to harm society in terms of murders and robberies.
Furthermore, educationist or mentors have also unable to make a connection with students. Modern schools have education related to the technology, modernization or fashion. Social values are not the part of their academics. Due to this youngers have less ability to understand about the respect towards their society as well their parents.
In conclusion, As youngsters are supposed to be the future generation. Such kind of behavior could give a great harm to not only on the parents or society but they might get affected also. I believe,, it should be controlled at an early stage. Otherwise, youngers could involve in other illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02250803859 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6924993663 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0339647315 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.380952381 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295640896667 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740056670927 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067227935135 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150335529169 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459697782138 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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