Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Getting a good job is the dream of every worker these days. However, there is a conspicuous argument between people, as, some of them refer it to tertiary certificates and qualifications while others believe that landing a perfect job relies on the amount of experience and soft skills that applicants might have. This essay aims to discuss both views in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To commence with, there is no doubt that some occupations request certain academic qualifications and skills as a fundamental requirement. First of all, a plethora of technological positions need scientific knowledge, skills, and an academic degree to work effectively and benefit the organization. For instance, doctors can not be hired without proper medical knowledge as well as a medical degree and authorization. Since this critical occupation needs particular medical information to be performed. Therefore, soft skills or even experience in a different fields will not impact at all in the selection decision.
On the flip side, experience and soft skills such as leadership and communication skills might booth the job seekers’ opportunities to land certain jobs. Firstly, professions such as sales, marketing, and many other occupations that require some vital knacks like persuasive and communication abilities are most likely to hire those seekers who have these general practical capabilities, as, they need it invariably during their duties.
To sum up, I strongly believe that experience and academic qualifications are equally valuable for job seekers in specific fields. Since, some professions require scientific knowledge while other jobs depend more on some general skills such as communication.
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...e general skills such as communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61977186312 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17850254949 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7301872219 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225985247364 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775663122496 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544684263586 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138107419454 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504702818794 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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