It is thought by some people that it is important to complete university education in order to get a good job, whereas some people think that it is essential to gain experience and develop soft skills. In my opinion, academic qualification is crucial to secure a decent job.
One the one hand, all the top most companies has a certain eligibility criteria for recruitment according to qualification. In other words, one with the highest degree has a edge over other candidates and probability to get selected is higher as compared to others. In India, for instance, maximum companies require a university degree and it is pre-specified at their career page. Those without university degree are removed for the job drive in preliminary screening itself. Furthermore, university education helps an individual to master a major subject which helps an individual to perform the job in effective manner.
On the other hand, experience and soft skills increase weightage of the resume. An experienced person can take decisions more effectively in comparison to freshers. Along with this, he can also use his people skills which he have developed over a period of time to manage people. Soft skills like empathy, patience helps an individual to interact harmoniously with other people and maintain cordial relation with colleagues. Another reason, is that they have practical knowledge which enables a company to make timely strategies which contributes to the organizational goal.
In conclusion, the basic parameter to get a good job is university education nowadays, as companies shortlist candidates according to education and experience and soft skills are considered at a later stage.
- Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award.Who is this personWhy did you choose him?What are the characteristic of a good employee. 73
- Some people believe that children should spend all their free time with their families Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative Discuss the possible arguments on both sides and say which side you personally support 77
- Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school leavers in most countries How far do you agree with this assessment What other challenges face young people today 71
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Full time university students spend most of their time behind academic subjects Some people say that they should engage in other activities also To what extend do you agree or disagree 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... words, one with the highest degree has a edge over other candidates and probabil...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...d probability to get selected is higher as compared to others. In India, for insta...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...can also use his people skills which he have developed over a period of time to mana...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e skills which he have developed over a period of time to manage people. Soft skills like empa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34082397004 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04868453745 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8964632952 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319395977512 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104760927989 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124830855676 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216231723632 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11761493936 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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