Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that computer is one of the important inventions of the last hundred years. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
For a variety of reasons, computers make our lives easier. First, computers have become a very effective working tool, effectively serving us. For example, every question instead of having to search through all the documents to find the answer, we simply need to type some keywords into Google. The ability of computers is not limited to any field: medicine uses it to make diagnoses about the body. In addition, computers have helped fashion designers and architects improve their productivity. Secondly, computers are a source of huge information. when you want to read something with just a few clicks, you have the information you need. computers save a lot of time and do not need to go to the library or bookstore, it provides you with hundreds of bookshelves like at the library.
In my opinion, computers have brought the human world closer together. Everyone in the world can communicate with each other via social networks such as Facebook, email, etc. you can see each other through video calls instead of wanting to meet each other and have to travel thousands of miles away. Besides, after the hard working days of life, we can relax. computers are the means to watch movies, listen to music or read newspapers that have become an indispensable part of many people in life.
In conclusion, there is no denying the benefits of computers and its practical role in the modern world. you need to be aware when working with this technology device to be able to exploit its benefits and limit the harm it causes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89045936396 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62238430619 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7040815815 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4117647059 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225572171365 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709742289117 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659524176058 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159251046861 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901894725897 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.