Consumer goods have become the most important of people's lives.Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
I am analyzing this topic of consumer products by using my everyday experience and observation. It is not surprising to see that most people think that advantages of using the consumer products outweigh the disadvantages. I also do agree with the above statement. The causes of this growing topic are consumption of daily products from hats to shoes to be more presentable. The products for leisure i.e. cars to maintain our standards or eating out in restaurants to celebrate the events. Lastly, using of technology that ultimately make our lives easier by all means. Let us take a more detailed look at the reasons of advantages overlooked the disadvantages of using the consumer items in our daily lives.
For a start, the products we use in our daily routine for example iron, which is consuming by every single person regularly. Though it does have disadvantages such as it is affecting the global warming but on the advantage side it gives you a look by pressing the clothes. In addition to that eating out in restaurants is clearly unhealthy and may gives you various types of diseases. However, visiting in restaurants occasionally with the family and celebrate some important events bring the family closer who live far away from you and get a chance to share some memorable events.
Another thing that is taking the whole world in a new era is technology. In the present globalization, humans cannot imagine their lives without using the technology. For example, washing machines which make the life so easier but on the same hand it make people lazy to wash their own clothes. Another example could be software for corresponding with the love ones who bring closer to their families who live far away.
After grasping a complete picture and enlighten the pros and cons of the above topic this is the duty of the people that they should realize their responsibilities towards utilizing the products in such a way that it must not harm others. Nevertheless, government also has the responsibility to change her policies regarding the consumption of producers that eventually affect the world slowly and gradually
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... life so easier but on the same hand it make people lazy to wash their own clothes. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, another thing, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00281690141 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87027463717 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3145103062 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13866679208 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444029369327 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801192947025 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692871878277 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621053399576 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.