Similarity among countries and the effects of this issue on economy and industry is very challenging and complicated subject. Therefore, experts and specialists can have a better response. Nevertheless, I think that it is positive development based on my limit knowledge.
First of all, psychological disorders are increasing all over the world more the past and one of the its reason can be comparing life with different wealthy people by variant facilities they are enjoying. Furthermore, thanks to technology people are more aware of each others life conditions from the materials that are used in a house to high technology appliances and luxurious private cars. Therefore, if they are not able to provide such materials, self-confidence are gradually disappeared and depression will be replaced. Also, this society won’t be able to nurture people with high motivation and the efficiency will be disappeared. Every society should consider the body body and mental health as a priority to avoid failure. Therefore providing commodities for people’s appeals should be considered.
By increasing appeals, a country will increase its imports and will provide opportunities for its members to create and produce high quality goods in order to have a positive competition with other countries and increase its exports too. Therefore, it will be very helpful in terms of having a boosting industry and improve its economy.
To conclude, technology growth that soar the similarity are helping countries to compete with each other for increasing their reliability in economy and industry fields which will improve people’s life standards and will help them to have healthy body as there is a saying that healthy mind is in the healthy body.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40510948905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97805969985 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8613566082 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136338180868 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050982219841 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389198210404 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824209927425 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404340226513 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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