Nowadays, it is believed by many people that the countries around the globe in the future will face challenging situations not only to save the environment but also in certain sectors such as population control and education. I profoundly believe that India would face the environment and population issues, and these circumstances can get better if civilians and the government take proper measures from now on.
There are many problems which are increasing day by day throughout the world because of human activities. To elaborate, firstly, the environment is what we all have in common and this is damaged due to pollution and trash (household or appliances) produced by humankind. If this trend continues, there is no doubt that it may increase in no time. Secondly, the population growth is increasing at an alarming rate than ever before for a decade and these situations can trouble the people in near future. Moreover, this population issue can lead to unemployment because many parents cannot afford to pay the higher annual fees and hence children should drop out of their education.
The solution to these problems should be taken from now onwards to protect ourselves and our planet, Earth. The government should create awareness to married couples about family planning programs which could be helpful to control the population. Next, the traffic police should impose high tariffs on the people who do not follow basic rules such as pollution checks on a regular basis. Moreover, the education minister of the country has to provide quality education at an affordable price, creating more and better institutes.
In conclusion, every country around the globe is facing problems related to education, environment, and population. Hence drastic measures need to be taken by the government and individuals because it is the responsibility of everyone to control this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...education, environment, and population. Hence drastic measures need to be taken by th...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26910299003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83551654592 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6388946508 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249271152814 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793109127563 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715337129603 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149356930962 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513445593801 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.