Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no gainsaying that the topic “expected environmental challenges to countries” gains immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. Down the centuries, there has been a drastic change in our lifestyle, due to everyday innovations and technology advancements. However, these inventions also have adversely affected our lives. Such as, many countries around the globe, are suffering with pollution, environmental threats and in the education field. My country is even facing many threats, for instance, shortage of clean water, pollution and most importantly, inflammatory population. I shall discuss all these issues in detail in following paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the most fatal challenge, I foresee for my country is lack of clean water in coming years. In many cities, people are already deprived of clean water and purchase it at a very high cost. There should be aggressive media campaigns to run across the country to avoid water wastage. Another essential long lasting step would be dam constructions. In addition to this, another major concern is pollution. With the ease of auto lease, everyone is now in a position to afford a car. Consequently, there are 10 times more cars on the road as compared to previous decade. More transportation, more fuel consumption resulting in more pollution in the air. Government should encourage people to commute through trains and buses; furthermore, cycle concept can be enforced like in placed in China.
Coming towards a very core issue that requires immediate attention, is to control population. More people means more area required to live and more resources consumption. This dilemma is interlinked with another concern of demolishing country side and construction of houses which will eventually bring environmental challenges. Government should pay attention to create awareness about preventive measure to control child birth.
To recapitulate the aforementioned topic, I my opinion, all these issues are self triggered. It’s not Government responsibility only to rectify these issues. We, as a nation should also play our part and contribute towards society betterment in every possible aspect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...ans more area required to live and more resources consumption. This dilemma is interlinke...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54790419162 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15436603765 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637724550898 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5760186691 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2272727273 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152291889911 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371158423039 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410028014272 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818210326389 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416817400049 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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