Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the last half-century, there has been a growth in environmental crises as well as population and educational problems. There is a high probability that these problems will continue to materialize in the next ten years if solutions are not proffered and executed. I shall discuss these problems as it relates to my country in the following paragraphs and suggest possible solutions afterwards.
To begin with, the environment is constantly polluted by wastes and carbon monoxide gas from industrial and social activities. Environmental analysts foresee an increase in pollution as population continue to grow. This is as a result of increase in traffic and industries to carter for growing population needs. Recent studies also show that the gap between the rich and the poor will widen and the ability of an average Nigerian to afford the necessities for daily living like education will decline as the economy worsens.
However, to solve the above mentioned challenges, the government must get significantly involved due to their financial capacity. Environmental pollution can be reduced by encouraging industries to use environmentally friendly raw materials and machines for production. In the same way, industries who are not aligning with environmental laws should be fined or penalized. Also, over population can be solved by encouraging residents in over populated regions to relocate to rural areas after they have been provided social amenities and conducive houses. Additionally, standard of living can be improved to afford quality education by providing jobs for the unemployed youths and increasing the minimum wages.
In conclusion, the next ten years can be the years for major transformation if the government pay sufficient attention to the problems that continually arise from the environmental pollution, over population, and educational challenges. In the same way, citizens must play their parts in ensuring that they support the government in executing these solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57189542484 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18820454366 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.962962365 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265050209798 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828471699274 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597051365691 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159875643207 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538361666482 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.