You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Due to persistent developments and upgradations being done in the country considering the growing population, we might face plethora of issues in the near future.
The population will increase rapidly in the upcoming years, due to which the suburban areas will become crowded. An alternative way for housing them will be snatching the lands which are farther away from the core of civilization, full of vegetation, food resources and developing the concrete jungle over it. Furthermore, a smooth connection between the two areas will be required, so as to create an ease in the transition spaces. For instance, a coastal development project is being carried out to connect the extreme corners of the city by utilising the coastal lands and constructing on them. This, in return, will result in loss of flora and fauna in that area. It will lead to deforestation and depletion in the quality of air in that region. Another example would be, the current pandemic situation has brought a few drastic changes in our lifestyle financially and economically. Digitalization is sought to be the major outcome of it which is hampering the education system to the core.
We need to avoid these developmental issues for the betterment of our country. For example, traffic congestion and all sorts of pollution being the few main problems of the Metro system, these lead to environmental changes. We can refrain from letting them get out of hand by eliminating the use of private cars which will help in pollution reduction. By doing this,we are maintaining the air quality and environmental biodiversity. Also, by developing a format for digital education by spreading knowledge and information about it to the people explaining details will help millions of people in return.
To summarize, we need to eradicate unnecessary developments and focus on the current scenario to get the gist of our challenges and how to overcome them.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...between the two areas will be required, so as to create an ease in the transition spaces...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...lp in pollution reduction. By doing this,we are maintaining the air quality and env...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14649681529 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04547198152 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5017629215 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174848017516 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562993574121 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318702467916 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942829887726 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338360638341 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...between the two areas will be required, so as to create an ease in the transition spaces...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...lp in pollution reduction. By doing this,we are maintaining the air quality and env...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14649681529 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04547198152 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5017629215 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174848017516 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562993574121 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318702467916 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942829887726 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338360638341 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.