Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Exploring foreign countries for leisure, pleasure is what rejuvenates a wanderer’s soul. People nowadays are wanting to visit such places with unique characteristic or cultural difference. Although there might or might not be adverse effects of such visits on the countries. I partially agree and would like to express my views in detail.
In my opinion, the traveler’s community is on the rise to explore out of the blue locations. For example, people love to visit locations which are not known to many or are less crowded. This helps the people of that place and the ones visiting to achieve some serenity. It’s peaceful to visit some villages along the outskirts than the main city to avoid stress. In a way, the travelers help the community to have economic yet cultural stability. The community receives recognition via the travelers and in return the community helps satisfy the wanderer’s curiosity.
On the other hand, there might be negative effects of the same. The certain issues which may arise due to exploration of unique locations is that they may become overcrowded by lot of travelers. Furthermore, frequent visits may generate a lot of cash flow in the economy but the community might lose its cultural importance. The cultural heritage might be destroyed by the overwhelming crowd and it might become a tourist spot for the locals as well the international visitors.
In conclusion, there needs to be a maintained balance of economic and cultural aspects of the respective location. Neither too less nor too much of pleasure travelling should negatively affect the countries being visited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19391634981 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89078427976 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577946768061 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6364886087 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218038851017 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677359553875 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653270622652 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124115941342 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613755324432 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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