Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Chaos arises when there’s imbalance in nature. The same applies to our society, there are some people who follow rules and regulations diligently and then there are others who take for granted due to which the issues and problems are occurring in the community. I partially agree to the statement and wish to explain my views in further detail.
We live in a secular country meaning, our society comprises of numerous individuals pertaining to different levels and parts of society. The rules and regulations are enforced by the government in our society to ensure that the peace is maintained in between the various individuals of the society. If anyone of the individuals were to ignore them do as they pleased and the cycle would continue, there would be turmoil in the society. For instance, there are various laws listed by the government for the society to be educated. It is not possible for everyone in the country to have the leisure of spending money on education, hence there are certain laws made for the poorer section of the society to achieve institutional and financial stability.
Our education system is made to include anyone and everyone who wishes to enroll themselves. Although, this might be true for the needy, some take advantage of such laws and exempt themselves from truly helping the society. I have gone through such experience myself. In my case, a certain individual had the liberty of being exempted from paying the complete amount of annual education fees only because he or she belonged to a poorer section of the society. In spite of having a better financial status they chose to take advantage of this situation. In my opinion this is exploitation of the rules and not a fair game for the other individuals. That individual’s seat could have been offered or given to someone who is in need of exemption due to his or her background and then it would have been justified.
In summary, all the above points suggest that in spite of having rules and regulations in the society, we as a community lack social awareness and are being selfish. The people are anyway doing what they desire by knowing the statute of limitations and knowing how to avoid them at best.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... a secular country meaning, our society comprises of numerous individuals pertaining to diff...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se to take advantage of this situation. In my opinion this is exploitation of the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, hence, if, so, then, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8544973545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67973225875 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1490798911 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166356030264 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508637973034 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344569616406 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943856188282 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451878948503 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... a secular country meaning, our society comprises of numerous individuals pertaining to diff...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...se to take advantage of this situation. In my opinion this is exploitation of the ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, hence, if, so, then, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8544973545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67973225875 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1490798911 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.941176471 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166356030264 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508637973034 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344569616406 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943856188282 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451878948503 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.