With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.
Do you think it is important to protect animals? what measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
Hunting is one of our old traditional sports. Therefore, generation after generation follow such games for enjoyment. Although, there need to be taken an initiative to stop illegal activities so, we can protect animals and birds, and also, take precautionary measurements for aforementioned activities.
Wildlife is a beauty for earth. Hence, this is gift from nature. For illustration, numerous animals and birds play their significant role towards environment. While number of species are in danger like polar bears who expel the beauty in the most coldest areas of the world. Consequence of illegal activities, this has became rare among other species.
Precautions may help to draw boundaries to save wildlife. Government need to banned such violent sports so, this could not promote further. In addition to this schools have to educate to young children about how much wildlife is important. By adopting healthy and practical practices we would win to protect animals and birds. Resultantly, we would able to save rare species and our future generation would also enjoy beauty of such animals.
To conclude, harmful activities may destroy our environment. Thus, I would cast my vote to protect those habitats which are in danger. Also, we need to pay our focus towards measurements to handle with this sensitive issue. Being a responsible human, we could not ignore our responsibilities towards our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r significant role towards environment. While number of species are in danger like po...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'coldest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: coldest
...polar bears who expel the beauty in the most coldest areas of the world. Consequence of ille...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the coldest'.
Suggestion: most the coldest
...polar bears who expel the beauty in the most coldest areas of the world. Consequence of ille...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...equence of illegal activities, this has became rare among other species. Precaution...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...uld not promote further. In addition to this schools have to educate to young childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37668161435 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94703116037 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0066726215 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5294117647 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114971845925 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318222153769 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424399548397 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713115014166 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023733756583 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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