Describing a famous athlete that you admire
In the world, there are many good players and famous athletes in different sports. One of them is Nguyen Thi Anh Vien swimming athlete that I admire very much. She is the only female athlete on the VietNam national swimming team and has accomplished a lot of success in her field. At the age of nineteenth, she won eight gold medals, one silver medal, one bronze medal for VietNam, and broke eight records then recognized as the best athlete outside Singapore at the 2015 Southeast Asian Games in Singapore. In Singapore, with eight gold medals won, Anh Vien won the second gold medals after Singapore's male and 9th world content 400m mixed. In 2015, she was the youngest army captain in VietNam and awarded the second-class Labor Medal. Although she is a person with many achievements, she is still considerate of her family as most of the money she receives goes to her parents, thanks to that they have to build a spacious house. Not only that, her words that made me interested in " I won with many medals, broke many records at SEA Games but I will not stop striving if I am satisfied with what I have achieved, I was a failure now, not waiting for tomorrow. I don't remember winning, to every day I try my best as if I have not won anything ". She is not only good at but also successful in all aspects. She deserves to be followed by everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ailure now, not waiting for tomorrow. I dont remember winning, to every day I try my...
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Line 1, column 1195, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to everyday'?
Suggestion: to everyday
... for tomorrow. I dont remember winning, to every day I try my best as if I have not won anyt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48387096774 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46747837513 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0429865967 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08135960093 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414982256716 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667634779016 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08135960093 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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