There subsists numerous positions in an organization, each on different pay scale, out of which senior management is the highest paid ones. Some people believe that it is essential to pay them more; whereas, others feel it is unjust. This essay shall explore constructive arguments for both the sides of the notion in the forthcoming paragraphs before giving a final opinion.
Undeniably, all the responsibilities are on the shoulders of director of the organization, because usually he or she is the one with maximum experience and exposure. Therefore, there is no biasness if the person is rewarded with high salary, as he deserves it on the account of his role. Not only the number of working years matter, but also the knowledge which director possesses. A recent news featured a director whose company has made a profit of 700 million dollars within a year as a result of his idea of change in strategy in customer involvement, which can only be derived from an experience mind.
On the flip side, some directors people acquire high position due to unfavorable circumstances and become a totally undeserved candidate of that. For example, Google's Director resigned suddenly one day and the next utmost senior person became the director, although he was not capable of that position. Moreover, some people work as hard as directors and take the accountability, which make those people think that they are under paid as they are not at that high position. Associate Director works equally well as director with the same understanding and expertise, still paid less, which exemplifies my above point.
To conclude, my opinion inclines over the fact that if directors are paid more, that is certainly due to various factors. Therefore, one should take this positively and work passionately to reach to that position.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11036789298 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88551050045 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5063124649 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132594539189 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473935178091 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376415132326 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763210397356 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388664375768 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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