Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Opinions diverge on whether internet is not a fundermental service so it should not be supported by the government. Although some formidably censure this sentiment, I am at loggerheads owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, the internet will enhance country’s education. This can be explained by a fact that variety of class nowsadays use online learning as a common format which in turn students can take advantages of unlimited resources. These resources contains knowledge that can reduce students’ time in gainning knowledge compared to the past which have limit of books and sources of information. In addition, with internet, students do not need to spend money on buying books because most of the books have the pdf file, which is mostly free online. This heralds the essence of internet for citizens as well as the answer for why the government should allow the free internet.
Further and even more prominently, internet can help residents to reduce the telephone costs. There is a handful of occurring social network such as Messenger, Instagram or Zalo which offer a free call if people connect to the internet. This signifies that those who make phone call in a high intensity can take advantage of the internet because they don not need to pay the phone costs. For example, students curently make a two-hour call free of charge for group discussion by using Messenger. Nevertheless, they seemingly waste a huge amount of money through direct phone call. As a result, free internet supply in the city is as important as road renovation.
Last but not least, having internet can be a useful tool for people to use in myriad situations. For example, if a person is traced by a stranger, but the phone runs out of money, the internet can connect a person with parents to inform his location so that his safety can be assured. Meanwhile, upgrading roads is likely to cost time and money much more than supplying the free internet. Hence, the government should prioritize in offering this service to the community.
All things considered, the internet contains multiple of benefits so the government should make it free.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
...of unlimited resources. These resources contains knowledge that can reduce students’ tim...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'limited'.
Suggestion: limited
...owledge compared to the past which have limit of books and sources of information. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75496934262 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5868025926 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214074275758 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778981991105 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539176959449 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135023402231 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304318657455 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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