Supermarkets have broken the grounds of local markets in the many countries. Though there are disadvantages for local vendors as most of the people would like to visit supermarkets, as they can get all the requirements from single place. Shutting down of local business due to supermarkets is one of the possibilities, which we will be discussing in this essay below.
Supermarkets have grown immensely in last decade, as it has proved to be a boon for the people with busy work schedule. It becomes so easy for the people to buy everything from one stop such as your daily needs like toothbrush, food packets, groceries, toiletries, and even furniture are available at one place.
As these markets have everything needed, it's easy for people to make a list for every week or for a month, and get their required things in one go. They don't have to go to different places to get what they need. This could save them much of their time. Also many supermarkets offers different discount routinely and also additional discount during festivals. This is something that people are more attracted too.
On the other hand the local stores or shops, they provided very limited number of items. Also, they do not provide much of discounts. In order to achieve pull business, they need to come up with better discounts and more products policies. So that customer can get most of their items from one place, also attractive discounts can help in increasing the sale
So in conclusion, if the shopkeeper or store manager do not use the marketing gimmick like discounts or other offers to attract people and keeping varieties of goods, there are fair chances for the local stores to loose their customer and may need to be shut down in next few decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85049833887 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64335355576 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8360468082 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146520368668 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604534619706 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059858978595 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927033500709 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733382645996 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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