Salary is the most important factor to be taken care of while choosing a job and any kind of dissatisfaction in it leads to a great loss for both the company and for a candidate. Where ”whether salary for all the employees should be the same or not” is one of the debatable topics of this decade. The essay demure the suggestion. Though there are ample reasons behind it, this essay will discuss ”knowledge and its costing” along with ”awareness” as two essential reasons.
To embark, undoubtedly, the young generation is way more knowledgeable in comparison, as earlier the studies were on broader aspects however now the young generation is smart enough to hone their knowledge in a particular field only. Not to forget, the aforementioned knowledge requires lots of money also. For example:- earlier, the cost of pursuing MBA from one of the top 100 colleges used to be around 10 lakh is now hiked up to 30 lakh. Therefore, salaries should be paid on the basis of their skills and not on the basis of equality.
Moreover, this generation is more into technology than people were a decade back. Such awareness towards technology makes them more competent. For example- Oxford research 2014, started technology related issues are handled more smartly by people ageing 25-32, as this age is more of risk-taking. Therefore, such awareness and quality should be paid accordingly and not on the basis of the one who wants to play safe.
To recapitulate, salaries should be determined by taking various factors like their knowledge and its costing, awareness towards work etc. into consideration and not by what other people in the same organisation are getting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...tioned knowledge requires lots of money also. For example:- earlier, the cost of pu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quires lots of money also. For example:- earlier, the cost of pursuing MBA from o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...e top 100 colleges used to be around 10 lakh is now hiked up to 30 lakh. Therefore, ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'lakh' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'lakhs'.
Suggestion: lakhs
...be around 10 lakh is now hiked up to 30 lakh. Therefore, salaries should be paid on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08602150538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08626502355 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0626366059 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113512977917 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421970079769 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499939270306 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765282238777 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442584896144 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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