Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology is science or knowledge put into practical use to solve problems or invent useful tools. Gradually, the invention of new tools would solve most of the significant environmental issues which are existing in the present time. I strongly agree with the fact that the advancement in technology has led to an eco-friendly environment.
On the one hand, Wastage of paper around the globe has been reduced. Paper is the main source for many industries and offices. The concept of recycling and reuse has minimized the usage of fresh paper and thus providing a great source of employment. For example, people in the MNCs' started printing both sides of the sheet. Moreover, the leftover paper is collected and recycled which are a great help for the government school children. Similarly, Today's newspaper is tomorrow's waste paper. Therefore, it is used for making eco-friendly shopping bags. Consequently, helping the environment to use less practice.
On the other hand, As there is substantial growth in industrialization which led to the release of chemicals that harms mankind thus leading to degradation of the surroundings. For example, in the past Bangalore had a climate that was moderate compared to any state in India. Due to the construction of new companies and industries around the city resulted in cutting down of the trees. Hence, Bangalore becoming too hot during summers and too cold during the winters.
To sum up, I strongly agree that there should be some environmental restrictions set by the government so that the advancement in the technology will not be a stake for natural habitat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...science or knowledge put into practical use to solve problems or invent useful tool...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...xisting in the present time. I strongly agree with the fact that the advancement in technology has led t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19391634981 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02042854941 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0431952298 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115370247222 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320452692501 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496095563373 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804776959026 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793942981834 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.