Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty exists in most countries; each country has a different method to deal with it. This essay will show a few reasons for global poverty, and illustrate some ways of helping the poor.
On one hand, world poverty may has several reasons; the first and the most important cause is the absence of social justice. The high difference in salaries in one country can create a gap between people. In addition to, imposing high taxes on several products and services, which leads to establishing a poor class in different communities. Secondly, the high prices comparing to the low income for many people leads to poverty existence. For instance, in 2010 a survey has been published in the New York Times showed that global poverty rate has increased by 30% in the last 10 years.
However, there are many ways to help the poor and provide a better life for them. Not only governments are responsible for this change, but also the rich should volunteer for that role. Firstly, Social equality should be a start for a successful solution of poverty. As we can find an incredible difference in social classes. Secondly, setting a minimum salary range, that balanced with prices and taxes. Thirdly, establishing facilities for small projects and creating job opportunities. A research has been published showed that providing loans for the youth helps in solving poverty problems.
In conclusion, many countries have poor people; each one of them tries to find several ways to overcome poverty. The rich and governments have a major role in solving such a serious problem. Studies, researches, statistics and programs should be done in order to looking for effective solutions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06137184116 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69436485573 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3855798864 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4705882353 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296990688786 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885534353954 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579088414351 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191929365764 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685269850286 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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