Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Not being meat-eater because of the devastating effects of meat on our health condition is a discussion that raised recently. I partially agree with this statement, in my point of view overeating of each type of food may cause severe health problems.
On the one hand, the vegetable is an essential nutrition for the human body and lack of vegetables in people’s daily diet definitely cause a problem regarding health problems. There are various types of vitamins and minerals in the vegetables and fruits which human body needs to survive and lack of each vitamin would cause a serious problem and lead to severe illness such as cancer or stroke. Thus, the nutritional benefits of vegetables and fruits apparently can be seen and include vegetables in the diet is undeniably important.
On the other hand, the human body needs meat for growing the muscles and burning it during everyday activities. Meat produces protein and Vitamin B for the body and it is obvious that vitamin B plays a vital role in human health. For instance, B6 prevent depression and lack of B6 in the body in some cases prevent people to do their daily activities, and it is found adequately in meats and dairy products. Hence, it is essential to notice that a healthy body needs every single type of nutrition.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on whether becoming a vegan or remaining a carnivore, in my perspective both diets are beneficial and we should use both of them in an adequate amount. There is a lot of necessary vitamins and mineral in both meats and vegetables and each organ in the body needs them for functioning properly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, may, regarding, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88612099644 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74484980064 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53024911032 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9706503895 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.818181818 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158800784416 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615300128657 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361247429673 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982124499551 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488688291136 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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