Statistics depict that consumption of meat is drastically increased across the world irrespective of religion. It is argued that all must give up consuming non-vegetarian food and ought to transform to herbivores as it induces some significant health issues. While I agree with the fact to a certain extent, however; there are proponents who hold opinions that it is implicitly unfair to merely stick to a vegetarian diet. This essay will outline the fact the failure to eat meat products will hinder the faster development of muscles, by contract, it will show eating vegetarian food far superior in the health perspective.
To embark with, it is imperative to incorporate meat diet in the consumption list of human-being. This is to say meat has varied benefits as it consists of nutrients such as proteins and essential fatty acids which are highly recommended by health experts to make part of a healthy diet. Furthermore, in human anatomy muscles play a vital role in flexibility and movement of the body throughout their life, indeed, they a building blocks of proteins. Hence, non-vegetarian foods such as fish, chicken, and red meat should be eaten on regular basis to meet the requirements of muscles. Despite this, it is observed more frequently than meat is getting contaminated due to several factors like animal specific diseases and human-induced causes such injecting steroids for better growth. As a result of these consequences several, people consuming this meat are facing serious health complications like heart diseases, allergies and there is a likelihood of causing cancer in some patients.
On the other hand, adhering to a vegetarian diet is evidently better than nov-vegetarian, because they are plant-based food and safe to eat, in fact, some vegetables can be eaten without cooking. For example, many scientists claim that eating a wide range of leafy, cruciferous and root vegetables on daily basis significantly stimulate the immune system and can eliminate free radicals in our body. Free radicals are unpaired oxygen atoms with a single electron and cause damage to cells, proteins, and DNA. What's more, the consumption of leafy vegetables enhances the eyesight to a greater extent. However, anything excess is dangerous, hence, it is necessary to assure prior to eating predominantly.
All summed up, I reiterate that although there are some merits of eating meat like providing essential proteins and fatty acids, I believe that being vegetarian is far more outweighs considering the health benefits such as flushing unnecessary components from the body and boosting self-defense mechanism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37804878049 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.997000057 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8887743412 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8125 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213488963227 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606929515294 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290761554254 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105589710745 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338640778094 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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