Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
It is true that juvenile misbehavior cases are becoming increasing across the globe especially in secondary schools. Some assert that it is the responsibility of teachers to control children, while some section of society contends that it is the sole accountability of parents. In my opinion, I believe that both tutors and parents are equally responsible for the behavior of children. This essay outline the arguments of for and against the accountability of children behavior.
On the one hand, proponents who implicitly state it is the responsibility of children have valid analysis. Firstly, children indeed spend a huge amount of their time in schools which indicates that school management will hold major liability. Also, every child in secondary education will be monitored keenly and their progress is often recorded on a timely basis. Consequently, it helps tutors to prevent students from creating any disruption and quarantine hyper child from group to pontificate and counsel. For instance, research conducted by Pennsylvania University depicts that children counseled at secondary schools were more successful rather than their other group of children who provided liberty at schools.
On the other hand, parents being the flesh and blood of their children are conspicuously answerable for their child's punitive behavior. In other words, each and every parent should educate their child about basic etiquette like respecting elders, helping needful people, and explaining personal life experiences to avoid foreseeable hindrances. Furthermore, parents should escalate their children merits and demerits to their class teachers to make them concentrate specifically and shape them to cope up with the fast-paced competitive world. To illustrate, a non-profit organization has conducted a standalone survey in 100 secondary schools including their parents and findings made them astonished. The study conclusively shows that children behavioral data shared by the parent to aided in placing children in esteemed position in every aspect of their curriculum.
To sum up, I recapitulate when it comes to the responsibility of children both the parents and teachers ought to be made answerable for their behavior. However, it is the parents part to share their children limitations and advancements to the class teacher to nurture them into a successful student.
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also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63966480447 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04889387776 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1755006364 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1875 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946695419971 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404585691635 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433246701794 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741692143003 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524738952738 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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