Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Human existence has always been proved because of the earlier manuscripts and writings that were preserved in the early years. Language is one of the parameter used by archaeologists to know about many ancient civilisations and records for verifying different information of the past. Nowadays all sorts of bad things are happening to several dialects and they somewhat disappear from this world without any prior knowledge. Some people believe in the theory of having handful of wordings to be sufficient but is it ok?
In my view it is a stupid thing to support as in today's life everything is important and to decode its secret even a tiny bit of a new word is less. So, language papers should be kept in a proper condition and if necessary advertisements, pamphlets, magazines and newspapers be published from them to promote it's usage.
Everyone who comes from a different culture feels connected if his/her mother language is a well-known thing. As, employment is also decided sometimes with the help of a person's ability to speak many different dialects and words. Although, not all but professions like voice acting, archaeology, business management somewhat requires a command on different languages.
International relations and coöperation among all nations can be maintained with the help of language translators with enough knowledge and command on their craft. Tourism and hospitality sector still runs on the beauty of different ancient and traditional way of speaking and makes the guests feel the importance of their surroundings. Children become more confident and intelligent because of the reading skills which they develop by learning many kinds of different vocabulary that can be built only by languages.
In the end, it is important to have as many languages as possible because employment, research, education and tradition all can survive because of the different dialects around us. Moreover a migrator feels comfortable if his/her language is also present in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...so decided sometimes with the help of a persons ability to speak many different dialect...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... the help of a persons ability to speak many different dialects and words. Although, not all b...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...se of the different dialects around us. Moreover a migrator feels comfortable if his/her...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2789968652 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98503719036 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611285266458 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8514177696 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177811285372 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056917958578 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033310181556 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968035805957 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397771457342 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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