Fast food is becoming one part of people's daily life everywhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyles and diet. Do you agree with this statement?
In the contemporary society, fast foods are fast becoming an indispensible part of everyones lives. Although, this has some effect on our lifestyle but the outcome is not always negative as people are gradually becoming increasingly health conscious. I firmly disagree with the above notion and in the following paragraphs I will put forth the reasons for my opinion.
To begin with, people are becoming more aware of their physical health. As most of the people work seated behind the desk for a good part of the day, they try to maintain a fitness regimen within their daily schedule so as to lead a longer and healthy life with their families. Additionally, they pair healthy diet with this regimen in order to maximize the results and set a good example for the children from a very early age.
However, following a healthy diet plan can become monotonous sometimes. Therefore, as a reward for being able to maintain good health people eat junk foods. This brings a change in their regular diet and gives a boost to their efforts. Consequently, they feel motivated to put greater efforts to maintain their healthy lifestyle. Moreover, many people are becoming increasing creative about how they can enjoy a healthy fast food meal so as to not compromise with their diet plans. Although people can get side tracked with the deliciousness of these fast food but being in a circle of like minded health conscious people will help them to get back on track faster.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasise that the mass public have becoming more conscious about their health and try to incorporate healthy recipies to their fast foods meals to get the best of both worlds. Therefore, fast foods becoming a part of a persons daily life contributes further towards a healthy life and not have many negative impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90938511327 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60711700941 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2735874767 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.357142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302574409938 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111823860744 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746541067198 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202102827748 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493968073397 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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