Fast food is a part of life in some places. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that consumption of junk food is increasing day by day and becoming a routine habit for people in few locations. It is assert by few individuals that excess and regular intake of packed food will have negative repercussions on the way of living and eating habits. I completely agree with notion that convenience food have adverse effects on human life.
To begin with, consuming excess junk food causes many health problems. The main reason of obesity among young children is excess intake of junk food. Due to this unhealthy eating habits the cases of heart attack among youngsters are increasing at an alarming rate. Apart from this, it requires very less time to purchase and eat convenience food, due to which people are opting to buy this, rather than cooking their own meals. The trend of preparing food at home is decreasing in numerous countries, which is the negative change as home made meals are considered extremely beneficial for human body. As a result the future generation will completely lack in efficient cooking skills and ultimately health problem will increase and life span will decrease.
Moving further, human body requires all the essential nutrients and a complete balanced diet for its growth and development. Fast food does not contain any quality ingredients and consuming it in excess amount lead to lack of proper vitamins, minerals and useful elements required by the body. In long rum masses will suffer from improper physical and mental growth. Moreover, it has been scientifically proven that children are turning lazy and inactive, due to unhealthy eating habits. Children are having sedentary lifestyle because of their decreased interest in sports and outdoor activities. Since children are not doing any physical activity, their brain will not be able develop properly. A healthy mind resides only in healthy body, hence decrease in fitness will lead to poor mental growth.
In conclusion, unequivocally eating packed food has enormous disadvantages and its high intake must be avoided if we want coming generation to be fir and healthy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'asserted'.
Suggestion: asserted
...abit for people in few locations. It is assert by few individuals that excess and regu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16470588235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65479914071 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591176470588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5033954794 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127617474839 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398911349495 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378015206997 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742160723639 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379901107092 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.