Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
It is thought by some people, that the father’s role in child’s grow is equally important to mother’s role. The father of a child ought to participate in educational process as much as mother. I totally agree with this statement, however there are some details should be clarified.
Parents are most important people in our life. They lead their kids throughout a childhood, help them to study at school, support them in financial way. The way how parents behave with children will result their values when they become adult. Boy should understand their importance in the future, when he become father. Besides, father is the one who feeds family, while mother busy with daily domestic routine. There are lots of examples, when male’s absence in a family reflects bad in child life. For instance, my friend Nick was raised by his mother, he saw his dad only two times in life. As a result, he has some psychologic related problems. Nick has recently married a girl and they have now a baby. The matter is that, he doesn’t understand man’s duties in family life and moreover, Nick does know how to treat his own child.
There is also significant aspect related to women that solely raising their child. It’s very difficult to raise children and earn money to maintain all expenditures. There is some welfare help paid to single parents in highly developed countries, however Ukraine is apparently not one of them. Thus, lonely mothers risking to get bogged down into the poverty, misery and infinite hardships. In worst case such women could decide to pass a child to the orphanage. So, if female decided to raise a child alone, she must be very strong and severe.
In conclusion, it is quite possible for mother to raise a child alone, however full family will benefit child’s temper in the future and help him or her to avoid some obstacles in grown life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risking getting'.
Suggestion: risking getting
...y not one of them. Thus, lonely mothers risking to get bogged down into the poverty, misery an...
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Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'In the worst'.
Suggestion: In the worst
...poverty, misery and infinite hardships. In worst case such women could decide to pass a ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'besides', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241116751269 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.152284263959 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0761421319797 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0634517766497 0.0501214627716 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659898477157 0.0437548338989 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0862944162437 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0253807106599 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61120110386 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355329949239 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0634517766497 0.0861772015684 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177664974619 0.021408717616 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177664974619 0.011925033212 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1906.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91925465839 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354037267081 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242236024845 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108695652174 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61120110386 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.037074148 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61801242236 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 72.1384693445 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6929273697 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 40.3236024845 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.25225225225 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261013346249 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.083552322719 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574746779177 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433759207685 0.534860350844 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174000176043 0.148594505496 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918751773101 0.134430193775 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569294124926 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2961365168 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553003714862 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182227080119 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436425354201 0.058150111329 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.