The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Transportation nowadays is considered an essential need for humans and for more than a century, there seems to be a drastic increase of vehicles running in Britain. The writer agrees in the proposition that the implementation of car ownership related laws would be helpful for the country. This essay will discuss the sample regulations for automobile in Britain.
Imposing high taxes on cars and fuel will help reduce the buying power of the people. With this being said, only corporate owners and those with high paying jobs will be able to purchase vehicles and sustain its maintenance and expenses. Singapore has been doing this law for 10 years and has paved a success rate of 60% lower on their traffic problems compared to when the above mentioned law has not yet been in acted.
Additionally, non-usage of vehicles over 5 years old is another option. The English people will be forced to dispose their old cars, thus decreasing the number of vehicles running in their streets. In the city of Dubai, United Arab Emirates, the government had made a law penalizing those who are caught driving cars over 5 years old. As a result, their local transportation department released a down slope report for their road accidents to 50% for the past 2 years
Hence in conclusion, coming up with new laws for transportation will surely create a difference in Britain. This will not only help solve current problems but will also prevent future issues to occur. Moreover, Britain has one of the best source of public transportation which their citizens can use everyday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ccidents to 50% for the past 2 years Hence in conclusion, coming up with new laws ...
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...sportation which their citizens can use everyday.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96590909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72705965077 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1724333342 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.25 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165717244172 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633232476879 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405155152258 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102228718504 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030800681121 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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