The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology has complemented engineering in the field of automobile and from wheel we have achieved 4 wheels. 1888 was the year to witness automobiles on the streets of UK and the number has reached 29 million by 2000. Substitute to these cars is cardinal and to manage the car purchase they must impose international acts. This essay will argue on the above said statement by presenting reasons and examples.
Transportation is pivotal to commute and move things from one place to another. I partially agree with the given statement that alternative forms of transport should be introduced to control cars purchase and international laws should be impose on the usage of cars. People would buy cars for comfort, status, harsh weather and safety reasons. Moreover, compelling them to follow laws would turn them into rebels. For example; a country like UK where the weather is extreme people cannot afford to use cycles or animals and public transport would not be sufficient to cater the size of population. Hence, it is evidently clear that ownership of cars is a mandate.
On the contrary, ownership of vehicles would harm the environment and would also create problems such as traffic congestion and cause devastating effects on public health. The best ways to control this is to manage the sales of cars and discard the old and vintage vehicles. Furthermore, introducing laws should be enforced by educating the people both residents and nonlocals. For instance; improving public transport and by applying high taxes on automobile purchase this goal can be achieved. Nevertheless, it seems possible to control the usage of cars by employing the above said approaches.
To conclude, cars are the primary source of transport and an alternative is the need of the hour to protect our mother nature by introducing laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imposed'?
Suggestion: imposed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10367892977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84330509154 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7375289831 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308589802685 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878245644336 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765740840314 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167494470969 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505505458577 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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