With the emergence of digital currency, people has seen the dawn of online payment era. Based on the development of the society, there will be the day with no-cash payment. In that no matter from the technology field or people's consumption preferences, we will embrace the future of digital payment.
To begin with, assistance from block chain techonolgy will help governments fight for money laundarying. In some regions, these crimes made police hard to trace back in that the flow in cash is not easy to find its origin. With the special fingerprints featured in block chain, the autority could easily find where the digital coins came from as well as where it will be. Besides, as for the public investments like building a school or library, people can supervise the Government completely, finding whether the tax they paid was spend in a reasonable way.
Addtionally, as it did in China, people would be in favor of digital payment which brings better service and conveniece. Chinese has enjoyed mobile online payments for over 10 years. For instance, individuals can check out merely by scanning faces in lots of supermarkets. In that the facial information is connnected with one's personal digital account like Alipay or Wechat on the phones. If they do not satisfy with the product or service they had, they can report the issues to the shope owners directly online with clear digital receipts.
When a majority group of people are dreamming of the bright future of digital currency, however, others may not buy for the advantages brought by online payments. The old people for example, most of them could not use smart phones well, let alone the digital payments. Besides, Being cheated by the younger ones with facial scanning payment with high possibility, their assets may be stolen by these youth.
In all, it will be the future of digital payments as far as I concern, while still some people like the old ones would not be happy to use them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
..., finding whether the tax they paid was spend in a reasonable way. Addtionally, as...
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Line 3, column 539, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ing whether the tax they paid was spend in a reasonable way. Addtionally, as it did in China, pe...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e facial information is connnected with ones personal digital account like Alipay or...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youth' or 'these youths'?
Suggestion: this youth; these youths
...sibility, their assets may be stolen by these youth. In all, it will be the future of di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92192192192 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52922033719 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7625467335 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276914025596 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949868349836 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775319340975 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182586139257 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083416646267 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.