Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
No doubt globalisation has taken place in many countries since decades. Many people believe that it is creating altogether a new culture and disappearing identitites instead, whereas few think otherwise. In this essay, we will discuss advantages and disadvantages about the former statement and I will present my view by supporting examples.
To start with, the globalisation is significantly increased in various countires. It has not led to only exchange goods and commodities at the international level, but the musical as well as the human resources. For instance, many asian countries has adapted western culture. With the help of internationalisation, few underdeveloping nations have transformed to developing nation. Further more, the Information Technology business has tremendously outgrown all over the world.
However, there are several disadvantages for the same. Due to globalisation, people in many countries who migrates to another place may face major cultural loss which eventually destroy the cultural identitites. Likewise, the people who adapt western tradition may suffer local business and vanish small and medium business. For example, the small business for clothing in India has effected because of international products. Additionally, the migration of young citizens of developing nations in search of better lifestyle rises to inflation making poor country poorer.
To sum up, I agree that despite of globalisation which has multiple advantages like creating another common culture of developement, the national identities of various aspects has been on the verge.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8093220339 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32634135735 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661016949153 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2577856555 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165757803678 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456102193248 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517396911788 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100027571034 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414431521141 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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