With a growing world population of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that genetic modification food offer a solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Over the past two decades, the practice of genetic modification of crops has been practised to combat with the problem of food scarcity for over growing population. As far as I am concerned there is exaggerated likelihood of positive consequences of adopting this phenomenon for long-term in comparison to its demerits.
Multifarious applications can be observed if food is modified genetically. Firstly, better for the environment. To elaborate, since GM requires less quantity of chemical to thrive, and the impact on the environment is less and we are as pesticide used or non-GMO crops Pollutes the soil. Consequently, farmers can leave their land which, in turn, hikes the yield because of crop rotation. The United States, where the most careful measurements have been done discovered that about 1/5 of farmlands top soil productivity boost due to which the use of this method was engrossed for years.
Further emphasising on my perspective, another advantage is increased flavour and resistance.To illustrate, it is observed that the taste of edibles become better when the genes of crops were altered and it also provides high nutrition value to the consumers. In augmentation to it, The tomatoes have been made for modification of crop quantity and the quality both.
On the stark contrast, some detrimental consequences are also there among them one is health issue. Ever since this method of yielding food was introduced, the number of childhood food allergies has risen significantly. In this sense observing health implications some people always prefer to take organic food.
Conclusively, there are always downsides of novel technology ever, hence same with the alteration of crops however, to meet the need of burgeoning population it has become need of hour to increase productivity of food by using the method of genetic engineering of crops and the grave repercussions should be abandoned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33663366337 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08722844702 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2484641767 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141623454487 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473521768171 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511002742488 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769341994086 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530188634384 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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