While it is true that the world is moving toward internet shopping. A study conducted in 2019 by World Economic Foruim says that interenet shopping is growing at rate of 30% every year. There are few arguments over the raise cyber shopping and its adverse affects on local outlets in urban areas. A majoity of people are in favor of this growth, where as others against the internet shopping. The follwing paragraphs would higlight my persective along with a sutiable example.
I agree with the central idea that cyber shopping grows to an extent that all shops in metropolies close thier businesses. First and foremost reason is that online purchase platforms present goods in an attractive way which reduces the customer visits to local matkets. Therefore we can expect no sales at these shops due low customer tunrout. Secondly, web shopping offers huge disscounts in such way that small traders cannot cope up the competition. As a result, custoemr lose the trust on these small outlet due to heavy price mismatch. For instance, mobile phose sales in online sites rasied in recent days. They offer 30% discuounts compared to shopkeeprs. So customers are optiing these new platforms instead of shops.
Finally, people save thier valuable time and enertgy in travelling for shoppig if they opt for online shopping as all the items are avialable in a few web pages and a few clicks away.
On the other hand, little shops will transform themselvs, become competitive and offer best services in order to stay open. This scenario ultimately benefits buyers and trade owners as well, Moreover, governments offering special tax holidays to small scale businesses to compete with the cyber shippoing platforms. As a result, sam;; shops will survice in these circumstances. Furthermore, shops procvide touch and feel dvantage over the cyber portal products. A majotiy of people wants to see the material before tehy buy. Therefore shops attract customers of this type and make a way for them to stay running.
In a nutshell, I am in favor of the subject and I agree to a large extent that electronic shopping will be leading in future and definetly has negative impact on all shops in metros, even leads to close of businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58067316293 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.041225762 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90476190476 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270713411017 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069364232453 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797713505716 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156085089742 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765310675721 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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