it is anticipated by some that the number of online shoppers would increase to such extent that could be a main reason for the brick and mortar stores closure. I would partly support this assertion since I completely confirm people's tendency to buy online, however, in my estimation, this trend would not hurt the personal shopping's industry .this essay is presented based on potent reasons and valid instances.
To begin with, let me denote the reasons behind the popularity of online shopping. The considerable one would be that, it can save your time and money. in other words, it allows you to access many websites in a short time, compare prices and find what you need at bargain prices. let me encapsulate this presented reason by illustrating a fact highlighted by Susan care who is a Canadian shopping behaviour specialist. she explains the tendency to purchase everything online from e-commerce giants such as Amazon has grown up to 50 percent in the last two years. Consequently, It is an irrefutable fact that people are more attracted to e-shopping in this age of technology and they do not spend time roaming in malls looking for what they are after.
Having said that, I believe the variation of shopping patterns in modern life still cannot perish brick and mortar stores based on some reasons. First and foremost, a certain section of the member of society does not trust the quality these online shopping offers. To put it clearly, they need to feel stuff in their hands to reach the certainty to buy it. Secondly, senior citizens of society are not tech-savvy so they do not find it feasible to shop online compared to technophile youngsters.
By way of conclusion, I do agree that e-markets are expanding all around the world. nonetheless, this trend cannot be a disappearing cause of brick and mortar stores in light of the fact that the presence of elderly people and conservative shoppers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91076923077 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69234109869 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593846153846 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3335841524 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177551214793 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588673503709 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423765618755 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996429347225 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390019190431 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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