The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Indubitably, online shopping is rapidly growing among the general public over the past few years. However, I firmly disagree with the fact that the online shopping companies will take over the business from shops in towns and cities. In this essay, I will explain why e-commerce firms cannot close online shops in towns and cities.
Apparently, there are several supportive reasons to argue that online shopping companies cannot lead to close the commercial markets in towns and metropolises. The first and foremost is the fact that consumers can instantly get the product after paying its cost while shopping from stores in the market whereas online shopping gives a certain amount of time to deliver our products after making payments to their websites. Although they do give an opportunity to make cash delivery payments, sometimes buyers need products in the event of emergencies. To illustrate, a person needs to buy medicines for their treatment, consequently, they will give priority to going to pharmacy stores instead of buying medicines online from e-medical online portals. if a patient buys a medicine online, it could be a factor of jeopardizing his or her life, so, it is always considered to shop vaccines and medicines from medical shops in the market rather than buying it online.
Furthermore, individuals can easily find the specific details of a product by taking information from shopkeepers because shoppers can get an actual feel of detailed information from the sellers in the commercial market in spite of researching the details on e-commerce platforms. For instance, I wanted to buy a Bluetooth earphone, and I did not get detailed feedback online from consumers who have already purchased a wireless earphone. As a result, I went to local electronic shops nearby my home where I got the best feedback for a bluetooth earphone from different kinds of manufacturers companies in my budget price. However, I purchased the product online but before that, I was not sure to buy the product because of its quality. I understand that online shopping provides a wide range of options, but there are some drawbacks of e-commerce shopping which is why shops cannot be closed in towns and cities even if online shopping is becoming popular among people.
To conclude, online shopping might be an ongoing trend among consumers these days, the demertis associated with the same cannot be ignored. Therefore, there is no day arriving in the lead of online shopping to take over business and closed the shops in the commercial market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13189448441 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7574037885 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520383693046 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7011869014 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285248654783 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112888940187 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699611229826 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193467760267 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027306555151 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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