House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to the tenants it only generates monthly income for the landlord, purchasing a house helps to bring a sense of security and pride. In my opinion, the advantages of purchasing a house far outweighs the disadvantages of renting an accommodation.
Owning a home gives offers a long-term benefit of security, equity and potential growth of personal wealth. The value of the home will appreciate and if one decides to sell, they can earn the profit of sale. Moreover, being a Homeowner allows creative control on their property. They can alter the property, including décor changes, landscaping and renovations, according to their needs and style. They can also generate additional monthly income by renting their property. To illustrate, purchasing a place of residence neither allow the interference from any nor there is any sudden notice of evacuation.
On the contrary, renting a property does not offer any wealth creation or return on investment as the property does not belong to the tenant instead, it creates a burden on occupant to pay monthly rent to the landlord. Additionally, the lessee cannot renovate the property according to his needs and has to follow all the rule and regulations of the owner of the property. To elucidate, many flat owners do not allow the entry of pets into their property which creates an issue for the occupants having pets.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that purchasing an accommodation gives the opportunity of freedom, safety and monetary compensation to the homeowners than renting a place
House is the starting place of love hope and dreams. There is an ideological verbalisation that the magic thing about home is that it feels good to leave; it feels even better to come back. Although renting a house does not bring any monetary benefits to the tenants it only generates monthly income for the landlord, purchasing a house helps to bring a sense of security and pride. In my opinion, the advantages of purchasing a house far outweighs the disadvantages of renting an accommodation.
Owning a home gives offers a long-term benefit of security, equity and potential growth of personal wealth. The value of the home will appreciate and if one decides to sell, they can earn the profit of sale. Moreover, being a Homeowner allows creative control on their property. They can alter the property, including décor changes, landscaping and renovations, according to their needs and style. They can also generate additional monthly income by renting their property. To illustrate, purchasing a place of residence neither allow the interference from any nor there is any sudden notice of evacuation.
On the contrary, renting a property does not offer any wealth creation or return on investment as the property does not belong to the tenant instead, it creates a burden on occupant to pay monthly rent to the landlord. Additionally, the lessee cannot renovate the property according to his needs and has to follow all the rule and regulations of the owner of the property. To elucidate, many flat owners do not allow the entry of pets into their property which creates an issue for the occupants having pets.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that purchasing an accommodation gives the opportunity of freedom, safety and monetary compensation to the homeowners than renting a place
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... outweighs the disadvantages of renting an accommodation. Owning a home gives offers a long-te...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...ude, I vehemently agree that purchasing an accommodation gives the opportunity of freedom, safet...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to the homeowners than renting a place
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, as to, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09830508475 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89320395575 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9185203384 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396903072832 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124762203515 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166706468158 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233150200131 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.27292953029 0.056905535591 480% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.