If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child's behaviour?
About three years ago, a local newspaper reported that one of the top local primary school student committed suicide because the student had been prosecuted of stealing. This student is supposed to have a bright future and should not necessarily end in that way, bringing a public concern on the increasing crime rate among these young generations. This essay will elaborate the root courses along with some suggestions.
There are multifarious reasons behind this problem. The first and foremost one is that the parent do not pay enough attention on their child. In many metropolises, it is common phenomenon that both father and mother are working class and they do not allocate sufficient time to their child. Stemming from this, these parents are not able to identify the behavior problem at earlier state. Secondly, most of the teenagers would like to show that they are outstanding from their peer. One easier way is to commit stealing. To them, it not only proves that they are brave enough to do so, but also circumvents from the adult. Even though these courses are seemingly unavoidable, the effect can be mediated if adequate measures are in place.
The problem can be actually tackled by both employers and government. Primarily, employers should adopt flexible working hours to the employees who has children in home as it can allow parent the flexibility to arrange time to look after their child. Secondly, government can promote different kinds of sport in school, allowing teenagers to compete with the peer in the proper way. Also, it can further strengthen their physical body.
To sum up, it is the fact that crime rate among young generations is indeed increasing. However, with the joint effort of both employers and government, the problem is surmountable. Personally speaking, our children is our future hope, we should on no account allow the tragedy mentioned above happening again.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203438395415 0.247107183377 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.171919770774 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0888252148997 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0687679083095 0.0501214627716 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0515759312321 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111747851003 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0458452722063 0.0403226058552 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64241409042 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343839541547 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00286532951289 0.00163938923432 175% => OK
Determiners: 0.100286532951 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286532951289 0.021408717616 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00286532951289 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1914.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09554140127 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369426751592 0.374742101984 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270700636943 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191082802548 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130573248408 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64241409042 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 67.275619379 60.7387585426 111% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4444444444 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1200518213 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.5145081387 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.23529411765 1.69124875643 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109479382038 0.332605444948 33% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.086258679312 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0575469536779 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487235009778 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132256865824 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435028368919 0.134430193775 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335067072421 0.0742795772207 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273364875076 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0352126138499 0.0638462369009 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720288562595 0.228012699653 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180133994424 0.058150111329 31% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.