Imagine you are a student living in a different country far away from home. Choose the country and write a letter to your family to tell them about how life there is different or similar to life in your home country.
Dear Mom and Dad,
I am best in my health and hope the same for you. It has been one month since your daughter left our beloved hometown and came to a completely unfamiliar country for further study. Although I have to face a few cultural differences, Paris is still a fantastic city for me.
First of all, the way French people greeting each other by kisses makes me feel uncomfortable. Traditionally, kisses or hugs are absolute not Asian customs for giving someone a salute. However, the friendly atmosphere created after those awkward moments is not bad at all. I found out that kisses could shorten the distance between strangers. Nevertheless, it is still weird for me.
Additionally, because of differences in climatic characteristics, French farmers cannot grow up plants which native to tropical regions. For example, wheat is seemed to be a staple food instead of rice. Therefore, I think that I have to get acquainted with eating bread daily soon or later.
Finally, above difficulties are not considered as obstacles that hold me back so please do not worry about me. There are no words can express my deep gratitude to you for supporting me wherever I go. I promise that I will work hard to make you proud.
Love and best wishes.
Your daughter.
Kha
Doan Le Uyen Kha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c characteristics, French farmers cannot grow up plants which native to tropical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81531531532 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79507680507 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.738738738739 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0667184162 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8125 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684093141668 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221181161428 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372923412971 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0276447480654 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260280312042 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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