It is often observed that leaving the homeland to people is quite for them. Nowadays, people from the distances decide moving to another country in order to ensure their security and survival. I would cast the reasons of doing so and results of being this.
To embark upon, there are numerous reasons of being kept this trend on. First and foremost, seeking the security and safety is the biggest reason because some minorities or others have to suffer through unfair trial in justice, and they are suppressed by their own country’s system without being any conviction. As a result, these circumstances may make them in compulsion to have a migration. In india, in 1984, the sikh minority has to suffer through brutal killings and coward attacks by the system, so the denied policy of justice out the question of security and safety for them.Secondly, attaining better future and career is much important for people leading and sustaining. This purpose takes them in the race of being migrated to the other location. As a result, selection of developed countries for migration makes them feel much comfortable and helpful in developing opportunities.
The picture is not so rosy for those who migrate and nation where they are brought in. Completely unfimilar environment does not allow them to start any work or job, and also for lacking in language. Higher number of people for migration means falling the quantity of resources in that country. In other words, when maximum number of people move to another nation to stay in, the risks are possible of food and other resources in quantity level.
In conclusion, migration, from one country to another, puts negative effects on the nation where they move, with respect to all necessary resources. This problem will not stop here, if we are lacking in taking any concrete step to prevail the peace and harmony globally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
...uestion of security and safety for them.Secondly, attaining better future and career is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01916932907 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61837021232 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1537877634 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.733333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0245807034086 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00918173717 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162777049711 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0137019633655 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140093840101 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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