The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It goes without saying that the world has never been the same since the advent of technology. Similarly, nuclear power is one of them which is considered to be kept peaceful environment by threatening, whereas it is more reliable source in providing cheapest energy to the global world. It has more benefits than disadvantages. I largely agree with the statement.

To begin with, there are numerous reasons which support to nuclear power be more useful source. First and foremost, earlier, the process of electricity production was accomplished by other natural sources, for instance coal, water and many more. Today, the world is experiencing heavily the nuclear power in terms of energy production which has production value more than that of natural sources. So that, being in maximum quantity, it became cheapest and more reliable. After being easily availability of nuclear power within the country despite the limit on other natural sources, production in all the industries,especially chemical and weaponary industries, has been easy and in growth.

As far as benefits are concerned, the invention of nuclear power has some disadvantages. Every country has a world domination notions which they consider only by gathering more and more nuclear weapons. As a result, threatening to other countries on being availabily of nuclear weapons may lead to the world under disastrous or war circumstances. For instance, in 1945, United states of America has detonated two atom bombs over two cities of japan namely, Nagasaki and Hiroshima. These cities are still suffering from the radiation.

In conclusion, although nuclear sources have extensively benefits for commercial purpose, but hardly to secure peace among nations by threatening.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, similarly, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45018450185 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00267442507 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8920246495 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238577797246 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087885158561 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792590842148 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15064213374 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418618980488 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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