The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The invention of the mobile phones are useful for the mankind and also it causes many health issues and immorality happen in the community as well. This essay explains about the merits of mobile phones are balanced as we compared with the demerits.
There are many advantages by using mobiles such as communication, trading, mass media, google maps, etc. Nowadays, people cannot run the life without cellular phones. For each and every level of people, the mobiles are essential. From illiterate to literate man, they cannot survey without it. Especially, in the business, the traders require mobile phone to share the message.
And at the same time, the mobile phones are the main reason for the social as well as the medical problems. Importantly, the youngsters are using the cellular in wrong way, such as useless chatting with opposite sex, sexual violence, theft, etc. For example, in my home town, eleven years old girl was kidnapped by using this mobile in which the kidnappers criminally utilize the function of mobile phones. Sometimes it may lead the youth in a crooked way. This is one of the immoral root cause of using mobile phones in the youngsters.
Another main demerits of cellular phone is medical problem. Some of them are using the mobiles beyond the limit. They are always carrying the mobile with them. They sleep, eat with it. Due to regular use, the rays from the mobile damages the brain and light rays from the display affect the eye as well.
According to me, from the above merit and demerits of mobile phone, the demerits are more than the merits immersed in the cellular device. If everything within limit, the human beings surely can enjoy it without any disorders.
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... the display affect the eye as well. According to me, from the above merit and demerits of m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246987951807 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.10843373494 0.155533422707 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10843373494 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451807228916 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039156626506 0.0437548338989 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132530120482 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0361445783133 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33651399775 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0120481927711 0.0326793684256 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.135542168675 0.0861772015684 157% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0120481927711 0.021408717616 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00301204819277 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1706.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90311418685 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373702422145 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228373702422 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148788927336 0.203846283523 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0795847750865 0.137316102897 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33651399775 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 58.855000168 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2105263158 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6137977866 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7894736842 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.814263465372 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 38.047896558 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 2.15625 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498187883812 0.332605444948 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118505772314 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0916442010645 0.0668466124924 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541710169422 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180353603187 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205732112383 0.134430193775 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129273033239 0.0742795772207 174% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454122666916 0.324371583561 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0489692292072 0.0638462369009 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35822267273 0.228012699653 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065483338435 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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