With the increased global demand for oil and gas, some people believe that undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. Do you agree or disagree?
Scarcity of resources is one of the major problems that all the countries around the world are facing today. There is a huge difference in the ratio demand and supply of various precious resources such as oil and gas. It is a great matter of debate that undiscovered areas should be opened to deal with the problem of resource scarcity. I completely agree with this thought.
To begin with, it is undeniable that we have over-utilized the available resources to such a level that they are on the level of extinction. To meet with the demand of non-renewable resources like oil we should start mining and extraction work in undiscovered areas. Those undiscovered areas are away from population, hence there must be abundance of resources that we could use wisely to fulfill our needs. There is an urgent need to monitor the usage of fuels, this could be done by the government organisation. Proper permits for the usage and fines on wastage of resources.
Along with that, the another major factors that support the discovery of resources in abandoned areas is that, it would provide employment opportunity to many people who are working in mining and extraction industries. Also, this would help in maintaining peace and harmony otherwise the shortage of fuel could have detrimental impacts on our lives.
In conclusion, However, it is our fault that we did not used the fossil fuels wisely and now it is about to finish. Extracting resources from an undiscovered areas could be a wise decision and I completely agree with this idea because, it is the easiest way to fulfill the demand of fuels in our lives. However, it is the responsibility of government to keep restriction on wastage of such valuable resources. Moreover, it should offer permit for the usage of the fuels such as oil and gas on large-scale, so that, people should use these resources wisely and preserve them for next generations.
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...tracting resources from an undiscovered areas could be a wise decision and I complete...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9226006192 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83623776315 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49226006192 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3588397804 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234010495481 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818535018825 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608905942896 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148662504512 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613912772739 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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